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Personal Spaces, page 8

21st Apr 2014, 6:50 AM in Personal Spaces
Personal Spaces, page 8

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Zomburai 21st Apr 2014, 6:50 AM edit delete
Zomburai
The moment you've all been waiting for! (I hope.)

See you on Friday!


Comments


Dodom 21st Apr 2014, 7:24 AM edit delete reply
Dodom
She's a brutal one!
Zomburai 21st Apr 2014, 12:25 PM edit delete reply
Zomburai
Asuka doesn't go easy on anybody!
Draginbeard 21st Apr 2014, 7:57 AM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
That really didn't take long. Heck, I lasted longer my first time at the orginal Mortal Kombat coin-op...at least Asuka didn't use one of her finishing moves!

Even still, I kinda like Tank, I would definitely be interested in seeing him take his licks and see what kind of guy he grows into...that is if you ever feel the urge to use him for a future story.
Zomburai 21st Apr 2014, 12:26 PM edit delete reply
Zomburai
I have to admit, I kinda like Tank, too... though I really, really enjoy writing jackasses. :P I hope I can find a good place for him later!
KarToon12 21st Apr 2014, 9:54 AM edit delete reply
KarToon12
5 seconds? That's a new record! XD
Zomburai 21st Apr 2014, 12:28 PM edit delete reply
Zomburai
A personal best in humiliating douchebags!
Drakanor Dream 21st Apr 2014, 11:11 AM edit delete reply
I think she was going easy on him
Zomburai 21st Apr 2014, 12:29 PM edit delete reply
Zomburai
She's not completely without mercy!
Peter Palmiotti 21st Apr 2014, 3:23 PM edit delete reply
Peter Palmiotti
Look at all the pretty flowers. ..POINT
My pants are kinda loose today. ...POINT
I heard Spielberg might direct a Yoda movie. ...POINT, I win!

...did we start?
Zomburai 21st Apr 2014, 6:00 PM edit delete reply
Zomburai
"This is your last chance to say you'll go out with me before I stop going easy on y--"POINT POINT POINT POINT POINT POINT POINT
CyberSkull 21st Apr 2014, 3:39 PM edit delete reply
CyberSkull
Banter just makes you a target.
Zomburai 21st Apr 2014, 5:57 PM edit delete reply
Zomburai
Tank severely overestimated how much Asuka cares about banter, or the fact that he's trying to hit on her.

Pretty sure that shot to his face is going to leave a mark...
CyberSkull 22nd Apr 2014, 3:31 AM edit delete reply
CyberSkull
He was certainly living up to his name there.

I think the smartest thing anyone entering the ring could say is "Don't beat me too fast, I want to learn something."